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작성일: 2018년 12월11일(화) 오후10:14
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검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation]
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]

In my summer vacation, i will do my best to grow up my foreign language skill not only english but also Chinese.
In my summer vacation, I will do my best to improve my foreign language skills; not only English, but also Chinese.
“I” must be capitalize.
Suggested word: improve. I changed the word "grow up" to "improve" to make it more appropriate.
I add a semicolon ( ; ) after the word “skills”.
Capitalize “English.”
In my summer vacation, I will do my best to improve my skills in foreign languages, not only in English, but also in Chinese. 

also, i'm going to go travel with my family and friends Especially, i plan to travel Osaka with my cousin. i think it will good experience to learn about japan's culture
I'm also going to travel with my family and friends. I especially plan to travel to Osaka with my cousin. I think it will be a good experience to learn about Japanese culture.
Always start your sentence with a capital letter.
Always capitalize “I’m” and “I.”
Remove the word “go” because you already put the word “going” in your sentence.
As much as possible, avoid starting your sentence with "also", especially in an academic writing. It is placed after a modal / auxiliary verb and before the main verb.  
The appropriate term is "Japanese culture" and it must be capitalize.
Always end your sentence with a period ( . ).

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