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How important is time management?

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I think time management is important because managing time allows you to spend time efficiently

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I think time management is important because managing time allows you to spend time efficiently
I think time management is important because it allows you to spend time efficiently.
Remove the phrase "managing time" from the sentence to avoid redundancy. Also, please don;t forget the period to complete your sentence.

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