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What is your dream job?

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I want to be a flight attendant because I want to see the world and experience different cultures. And I know that the flight attendant has to meet and deal with many different kinds of people on the job. With my bright and sociable personality, I would make passengers happier and more comfortable. I hope to be a specialist in the service field through this job.

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I want to be a flight attendant because I want to see the world and experience different cultures.
This is correct.

And I know that the flight attendant has to meet and deal with many different kinds of people on the job.
I know that a flight attendant has to meet and deal with many different kinds of people on the job.
Avoid starting your sentence with ‘and.’
Use the article ‘a’ instead of ‘the.' because you are referring to no particular attendant.
Being a flight attendant means you have to meet and deal with different kinds of people.

With my bright and sociable personality, I would make passengers happier and more comfortable.
This is correct.

I hope to be a specialist in the service field through this job.
This is correct.

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