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What products of food science and biotechnology do you use in your daily life?

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Hi, I'm Lily. I'm so sorry too late. l was little sick. So I forget homework. A. I use in a nutrient, processed food, Instant food, medicine ect. boiled food. Once again, sorry too late.  

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Hi, I’m Lily. I’m sorry too late.
Hi, I’m Lily. I’m sorry I" style="text-decoration:underline"> was too late.
Add the subject pronoun I in your sentence; it's a pattern.
Use the simple past tense of the verb -was.

I was little sick. So I forget homework.
I was a little sick, so I forgot my homework.
A little (adverb) which means to a small extent.
Combine the two dependent clauses to make one sentence. Put a comma before conjunctions (and, but, so, for, nor, yet) when they are connecting two clauses. They must be written in a small letter.

I use in a nutrient, processed food, Instant food, medicine ect. boiled food.
I use vitamins, supplements, processed food, instant food, medicine, pre-cooked foods," style="text-decoration:underline"> etc.
Correct terms for nutrient is vitamin (supplements).
Instant food is a common noun, so it must be written in a small letter.
Spelling check - etc. (This is the correct spelling of etcetera.) Put it at the end of the series.
Use the conjunction and before the last word/phrase in a
series.

I use vitamin supplements, processed, instant, pre-cooked foods, and medicine, etc.

Once again, sorry too late.
Once again, I’m sorry that I submitted it late.
Use the correct contraction I’m and followed by past tense verb submitted.

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