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What are the characteristics of a good citizen?

작성자: cnc36
작성일: 2018년 09월11일(화) 오후10:37
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검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
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I think who have dedication and commitment to the community and doesn't harm to other people is a good citizen. 
I think a person who has dedication, commitment to the community, and doesn’t harm other people is a good citizen.
Use a comma ( , ) in writing to separate parts of a sentence showing a slight pause, or to separate the various single items in a list.
I add the word “a person” to be more specific.

A good citizen is someone who is dedicated, doesn’t harm other people, and who has commitment to the community.

I respect those people and I hope there were more like them. 
This is correct!

I will try to become a good citizen, observing the rules of society and doing my duty well. 
I will try to become a good citizen, observing the rules of society, and doing my duty well.
Use a comma ( , ) in writing to separate parts of a sentence showing a slight pause, or to separate the various single items in a list.
I will try to be a good citizen by following the rules of society and doing my duty well.

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