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Do you think that Koreans have to eat kimchi as a part of their national identity?

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Yes, I think so Beacuse kimchi is korean traditional food. Since long time ago eat in the winter,fermented food. So, many koreans enjoy the kimchi.

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Yes, I think so Beacuse kimchi is korean traditional food.
Yes, I think so, because kimchi is a Korean traditional food.
Avoid starting your sentence with "because". Observe proper spelling and capitalization. It would be better if you can specify what are you saying "yes" for because it is the start of your sentence. 
I think Koreans have to eat kimchi as a part of their national identity, because it is their traditional food.  

Since long time ago eat in the winter,fermented food. So, many koreans enjoy the kimchi.
SInce a long time ago, Koreans have been eating fermented foods during winter. So many Koreans enjoy kimchi.
You can combine sentences with the same thought. Observe proper capitalization. Make sure that your following sentence relates to its preceding sentence.
SInce a long time ago, Koreans have been eating fermented foods during winter. So many Koreans enjoy kimchi. during this season.   

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