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Which do you prefer? Eating in a restaurant or in a hotel?

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I prefer eating in a restaurant if I am in abroad. When I went to Taiiwan, I go to hotel restaurant. And I felt very confused that here is real restaurant. The food wasn't delicious and I didn't eat more food. But the last night in taiiwan, we went to restaurant and very satisfied their food. So I prefer eating in restaurant.   

I prefer eating in a restaurant if I am in abroad. 
I prefer eating at a restaurant if I am abroad.
Change the preposition "in" to "at". There is no need to put any preposition before abroad.
I prefer eating at a restaurant when I am abroad.


When I went to Taiiwan, I go to hotel restaurant. And I felt very confused that here is real restaurant. 
When I went to Taiwan, I went to the hotel's restaurant and I felt very confused if it was a real restaurant. 
Please double-check your spelling to avoid errors. It's "went" because it's in the past. Merge the second sentence as your continuation.
If you meant to say that you were confused that there was a restaurant in the hotel, you could say "... and I felt very confused that there was an actual restaurant there."

When I went to Taiwan, I went to the restaurant of the hotel we stayed at and I felt very confused if it was a real restaurant.


The food wasn't delicious and I didn't eat more food. 
The food wasn't delicious, so I didn't eat more food.
Use so instead of and as this means "and for this reason.".
The food wasn't delicious, so I didn't eat my food further.

But the last night in taiiwan, we went to restaurant and very satisfied their food. 
But on our last night in Taiwan, we went to a restaurant and I was very satisfied with their food. 
There's only one "i" on Taiwan. The sentence sounded lacking when you were talking about your satisfaction of the food so better to refer yourself in it. Put the 
article 
to introduce the singular restaurant that would represent any restaurant in general.
 That is why I prefer eating in a restaurant than eating in a hotel.

 

 

  

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