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What kind of person do you dislike?

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작성일: 2018년 08월22일(수) 오후11:39
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검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation] 
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]

I don't like a person who is selfish.
This sentence is correct.
 
This is because, the person who is selfish makes me tired.
This is because the person who is selfish makes me tired.
There is no need to put a comma after "because".

These jos are working with people, not alone. 
These jobs are working with people, not alone.
The correct spelling is "jobs."
You work with people in these jobs. You are not alone.

And all of them improve quality of our lives.  
Furthermore, all of them improve the quality of our lives.  
Use transition words at the beginning of the sentence instead of conjunctions.
Use articles (a, an, the) before count nouns.

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