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Do you think we can continue these preservation methods in the future? Why? Why not?

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In my opinion, these natural methods of food preservation will continue in the future. when people make traditional food, they need these methods and also, natural food preservation help our health so these methods are useful and we should keep these

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In my opinion, these natural methods of food preservation will continue in the future.
This is correct.

when people make traditional food, they need these methods and also, natural food preservation help our health so these methods are useful and we should keep these.
When people make traditional food, they need these methods. Also, natural food preservation helps our health so its methods are useful that we should keep them.
The first letter of your sentence MUST be in capital letter.  You can separate your first and second sentence for they have different thoughts. No need to put "and", "also" is enough. As the subject is preservation, the verb should be in singular form. You have to be careful of your pronoun antecedent, conjunction, and object.     

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