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I like meeting people!

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I love meeting different kinds of people. I feel energized and alive when I interact with many people. So I've always wanted to work as a cabin crew member. This job would allow me to face and communicate with many people every day . 


I love meeting different kinds of people.
This sentence is correct.

I feel energized and alive when I interact with many people.
This sentence is correct.

So I've always wanted to work as a cabin crew member. 
So, I've always wanted to work as a cabin crew member. 
You have write comma (,) after the word so to put emphasis your opinion.
That is why I've always wanted to work as a cabin crew member.

This job would allow me to face and communicate with many people every day. 
This sentence is correct. 

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