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How would you handle a patient that constantly complains about pain?

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작성일: 2018년 07월03일(화) 오후10:26
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검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation] 
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]


First of all, I would listen sympathetically to their complaint, reassure them that their concerns were being heard, and I was doing everything possible to help them. 
This is correct, but it would be better if you use ‘are’ instead of ‘were’, and 'am' instead of 'was'. Using ‘were’ would mean that you listened to their concerns in the past, but it could also mean you are not listening to their concerns anymore. You could try this sentence:
First of all, I would listen sympathetically to their complaint, reassure them that their concerns are being heard, and I am doing everything possible to help them.

I am read to be willing to support and motivate the patient, especially when patients become agitated by their pain. 
I am ready and willing to support and motivate the patients, especially when they become agitated by their pain.
You probably mean 'ready'.
Use ‘patients’ if you are talking about several patients.
To avoid being ‘redundant’, use the pronoun ‘they’ as substitute for the noun ‘patients’.


Then, I would reassure the patient that everything possible was being done to alleviate their discomfort. 
Then, I would reassure the patient that everything possible is being done to alleviate their discomfort. 
It is better to use ‘is’ (present) instead of ‘was’ (past) to indicate that the action is presently being done.

Also, I would confer with the attending doctor to make sure that the patient's pain was being managed in the most effective way.
Also, I would confer with the attending doctor to make sure that the patient's pain is being managed in the most effective way.
It is better to use ‘is’ (present) instead of ‘was’ (past) to indicate that the action is presently or still being done.

I believe that patient should be my priority all time. 
I believe that patients should be my priority all the time. 
If you are referring to patients in general, it is better to say ‘patients’.
The correct phrase is ‘all the time’. You could also say ‘at all times’.


I willing to support and motivate the patient, especially when patients become agitated by their pain. 
am willing to support and motivate the patient, especially when patients become agitated by their pain. 
‘I’ should be accompanied by the be verb ‘am’.

I try to being aware of my patients’ attitudes and personalities.
will try to be aware of my patients’ attitudes and personalities.
Use will + verb to indicate an action that will happen in the future.
An infinitive follows this pattern: to + base form of the verb, therefore, change 'being' to 'be'.
  

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