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If you could choose, which would you prefer? Living in the city or living in the farm? Explain why?

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작성일: 2018년 06월22일(금) 오후09:00
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I prefer living in the city. City is convenient. Because city have many stores and supermarket is near.

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검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation]
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]

I prefer living in the city.
This is a correct sentence.

City is convenient. Because city have many stores and supermarket is near.
City is convenient because it has many stores and supermarkets are near. 
The last two sentences can be combined because they share the same thought. Avoide using "because:" as the start of the sentence. Use "pronouns" to avoid being redundant in making sentences. Use plural when referring to supermarkets in general.

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