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What did you like/dislike about your last job?

작성자: cnc36
작성일: 2018년 06월19일(화) 오후11:30
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검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation] 
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]



I enjoyed the people I worked. 
I enjoyed the people I worked with.
Add “with” to your sentence because you “work with people”, not “work people”.

It was so friendly and cheerful atmosphere so I enjoyed going into the hospital. 
They were so friendly and they made a cheerful atmosphere so I enjoyed going to the hospital.
If you are talking about the people, you should use “they” instead of “it”.
If you are talking about the atmosphere, you could say: 
Our workplace had a friendly and cheerful atmosphere so I enjoyed going to the hospital.

I felt that our team play was great. 
This is sentence correct but instead of play, you could also say “teamwork”.


The reason, i left previous hospital, is I thought I was not challenged enough at the work. 
The reason I left ">the previous hospital is I thought I was not challenged enough at work.
Always capitalize “I”. 
Add the article “the” to introduce the “previous hospital” you worked at because you are referring to a specific hospital.
The reason I left the previous hospital is I thought the job was not challenging enough.


To begin with, The company offered a number of opportunities for a good skills and machines. 
To begin with, the company offered a number of opportunities for good skills and knowledge in operating machines.
Do not capitalize “the” if it is not the first word in a sentence.
Omit “a” because “skills” is plural.
“Skills” is a noun. To make your sentence parallel, you should also use a noun when you talk about machines. In this case, you could use “knowledge”.


However, After many years, I felt that it was the lack of challenge and study. 
However, after many years, I felt that there was lack of challenge and learning.
Do not capitalize “after” if it is not the first word in a sentence.
The correct pronoun is “there” instead of lack. You could also say “there was no…”
If you are talking about new things learned at work, the more appropriate term is “learning.”


While I did enjoy working there and appreciate the skills. I developed while with the company. I think my skill can be more useful where else, where my capabilities are more recognized and there is opportunity for development. 
While I did enjoy working there and I appreciate the skills that I developed, I think my skills can be more useful elsewhere. I want to work in a company where my capabilities are recognized more and there is an opportunity for further development.
I reorganized your sentences. You should combine the first two sentences because the first sentence is incomplete. The last sentence can be rephrased and serve as a supporting sentence.


I feel that as valuable as that experience has been, I am anxious to work on more specialized skills. 
This sentence is correct.

Also, I believe that a larger company with an international presence can offer challenges, as well as opportunities unavailable at a smaller firm. 
This sentence is correct.

The position with your company is a great match for my skill set. 
This sentence is correct.

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