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Do you like meeting new people? Why or Why not?

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작성일: 2018년 06월15일(금) 오후05:53
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Yes, I like meeting new people. Because I like talking new people, When i talking new people i feel interesting.


검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation]
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]

Corrections:

Yes, I like meeting new people. Because I like talking new people, When i talking new people i feel interesting.
Yes, I like meeting new people because talking with them is interesting.
Your sentence should be continuous. Don't put period before because and it should be in small letter.
Because is not appropriate at the beginning of the sentence.
Because is a conjunction. It connects two sentences. The pronoun I should  always be capitalized.
Refrain from repeating the same words.  You can use pronouns. "With" is a preposition. We use the word with to talk about connections between people and things.

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