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Do you like your mother's cooking? Why or why not?

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초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]


I like my mother's cooking. My mother says, I'm not good at cooking but I like it.
This is correct!

Since I'm living apart from her, I miss more my mother's cooking.
This is correct!
Because I live apart from her, I miss my mother's cooking even more.

Whenever I visit my hometowm, I request cooking to my mother.
Whenever I visit my hometown, I request my mother’s cooking.
Check your spelling of ‘hometown.’ In your second clause, what you "request" is the food that your mother cooks. Hence, "request my mother's cooking".

I like a 닭볶음탕 and Bossam even spiced spinach.
I like 닭볶음탕 and Bossam, an even spiced spinach.
Remove the article ‘a’ in your sentence because you already specified what you like. You use the article 'a' when your subject is not specific.

When she was newly wed, she was a bad cook.
When she was a newlywed, she was a bad cook.
"Newlywed" is one word. I added the article ‘a’ before the word ‘newlywed’because it is a singular noun.

My father likes bean sprouts soup so that my mother cooks for my father.
My father likes bean sprouts soup, so my mother cooks it for my father.
Put a comma (,) before the conjunction ‘so.’ It not correct to use "so that" in your sentence as it is used to show purpose or give explanation.

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