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What are the reason why people have different eyes color?

작성자: cnc36
작성일: 2018년 04월25일(수) 오전12:10
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I think so simple about reason. The reason is world people have a different DNA. So we are different to everything. For example tall, hair color, face ect many thing different

I think so simple about reason.
I think the reason is simple.
Arrange the words so that the sentence is easier to understand. "The reason" is your subject, "is" is your linking verb, and "simple" is your compliment. 

The reason is world people have a different DNA. So we are different to everything.
People around the world have different DNAs, so we differ in everything.
Use proper words and observe proper tenses if needed. Also, observe proper punctuation marks. As much as possible, avoid using conjunctions at the beginning of your sentence. Put comma(,) before the word "so". 
People around the world have different DNAs, so we differ from each other.


For example tall, hair color, face ect many thing different
For example: height, hair color, and face structure.
Use colon to precede a list of items. Appropriate words need to be used.

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