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작성일: 2018년 04월04일(수) 오후04:48
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검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation]
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence] green  

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Hi!
Always start your sentence with a capital letter. "Hi" is a greeting, which has a special function. It is a valid utterance on its own. It is already considered a sentence.  

I'm gonna talking about what my favorite is.
I'm gonna be talking about what my favorite thing is.
Use "be + verb-ing" to indicate a present continuous verb. You can also say, " I'm gonna talk about". Also, add the word "thing" as the subject compliment of the word "favorite".

My favorite is playing basketball.
My favorite thing is playing basketball.
Add the word "thing" as the subject compliment of the word favorite.

I started basketball when I was 15 years old.
I started playing basketball when I was 15 years old.
The word "basketball" is not used as a verb or an adjective, so add the word "playing" do describe the word "started".

It's been about 9 years since I played basketball, but I'm not a pro basketball athlete.
It's been about 9 years since I started playing basketball, but I'm not a pro basketball athlete.
You still play basketball, so change the tense of your verb. You may use the word "start" to indicate how long you have been playing the sport. 

i just enjoy playing basketball.
I just enjoy playing basketball.
Your sentence is grammatically correct, but always start your sentence with a capital letter.

when I'm playing basketball, i feel a lot of emotions. Happiness, Acivement, Competition, winning, rewarding.. and so on.
When I'm playing basketball, I feel a lot of emotions; happiness, satisfaction and triumph.
Always start your sentence with a capital letter. The pronoun "I" is always capitalized no matter its location in your sentence. Also, the words " achievement, winning, competition, winning, and rewarding" are not used to describe an emotion as they are nouns. To make your sentences parallel, choose the words that could describe your emotions accurately. The words "happiness," "satisfaction," and "triumph" are the appropriate words.


There's no reason for loving basketall.
This sentence is grammatically correct; I'm not sure about the thought, though.
There is no reason not to love basketball.


I like playing basketball because I love playing basketball.
This sentence is correct; just improve the thought of this sentences.
I like playing basketball because I love the sport. 


After playing basketball and taking a shower, I feel very refreshing.
After playing basketball and taking a shower, I feel very refreshed.
The word "refreshing" is not used to describe a feeling, use the word "refreshed" instead.


There is nothing better than that.
This sentence is correct


Even today, I played basketball in my university ground.
Even today, I still play basketball in my university ground.
Add the word "still" and use the base form of your verb "play" when referring to a hobby or a general truth.


Although I defeated the game, It was good in its own way.
Although I got defeated in the game, it was good in its own way.
You don't defeat a game; however, it is you who can be defeated by your opponent. So add the auxiliary verb "got" to correct the thought of your sentence. Moreover, a comma does not signify that your sentence has ended, so do not capitalize the first letter of the word "it".


This will tell you how much I love basketball.
This sentence is correct.



Thanks for reading. ^^  
Thank you, Walter! You did great! - Teacher Geraldene

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