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Do you think our society is too dependent on technology like smartphones? Why or why not?

작성자: cnc36
작성일: 2018년 02월27일(화) 오후08:21
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I believe that our society is very addicted to using technology like smartphones and computers.
I believe that our society is very addicted in using technology like smartphones and computers.
Use in instead of to because IN indicates a belief, opinion, interest, or feeling, while TO is used to express direction, place or position.
I believe that our society is addicted in using technology like smartphones and computers.


For instance, if I didn't bring my smartphone with me, I wouldn't focus on anything and I would start being annoyed with this happening.
This is correct.
For instance, if I didn't bring my smartphone with me, I wouldn't  focus on anything and would start to get annoyed.

Nowadays, we can do almost everything from shopping to calling cabs with technology. Therefore, it is rarely possible for the people to live daily lives without it.  
This is correct. 
Nowadays, we can do almost everything from shopping to hailing cabs with new technology. Therefore, it's almost impossible for people to live their daily lives without it.

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