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What is happiness for you? (What makes you happy?)

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Listening to music and Watcing music video make me happy. So I always listen and watch my favorite artist(EXO)'s songs.

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Listening to music and Watcing music video make me happy.
So I always listen and watch my favorite artist(EXO)'s songs.

Listening to music and watching music video make me happy, so I always watch and listen to my favorite artist (EXO)'s songs.

Be careful with your spelling and proper capitalization of words. You only capitalize proper nouns, the pronoun I, and the beginning of a sentence.
Pattern: Independent clause, conjunctions (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) dependent clause.
"Listen to" is a fi
xed expression. Please put this after the verb "watch" as it comes with a preposition.

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