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The White Tiger

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It's the character of white tiger. so I like it (she's cute!!!)




검은색:학생영작=>[Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=>[Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=>[Grammar explanation] 
초록색:나은문장=>[Better sentence]

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It's the character of white tiger.
t's the character of the white tiger. 
You must need to use the article "the" because you are referring to the definite noun, white tiger. 


so Ilike it. (she's cute!!!)  
So, I like it. She's cute!
You must start your sentence with a capital letter.
If you started your sentence with a conjunction (e.g., so, but, end, etc.),



place a comma after it. 
Always end your sentence with a period.
Better yet, make one sentence out of the two when you are using the conjunction "so".
IThe character of the white tiger is cute, so I like it.

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