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Talk about a time when you got lost

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작성일: 2018년 11월21일(수) 오후06:19
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검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence] 
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
 빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation] 
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence] 

1 years ago, I went to honkong with my friend. We went to free travel. So we planned a schedule by ourself but the way is strange that we got lost. Although there is google map mobile application to navigate, we don't know it. The restaurant is placed next to the street. We didn’t see it. We wander from place to place. After travel, we were tired. 


1 years ago, I went to hongkong with my friend.
year ago, I went to Hongkong with my friend
1’ (one) is singular, so your noun, YEAR, should be in its singular form.  
Hongkong’ is a proper noun because it’s the name of a place. Proper nouns should start with a capital letter



We went to free travel.
We went to travel freely
FREELY is used in this context. It’s an adverb of manner, which qualifies TRAVEL


So we planned a schedule by ourself but the way is strange that we got lost..
We planned a schedule by ourselves, but the way is strange that we got lost..
SO should not be used at the beginning of a sentence in a formal writing. 
OURSELVES is the reflexive pronoun of WE.
Put a comma before a coordinating conjunction when it functions as a connector between two independent clauses
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Although there is google map mobile application to navigate, we don't know it.
Although there is Google map mobile application to navigate, we don't know how to use it.
Capitalize the first letter in the word ‘Google’ because it’s a proper noun.
Add 'how to use' to explain yourself better.



The restaurant is placed next to the street.
This sentence is correct
The restaurant is positioned next to the street.


We didn’t see it.
This sentence is correct


We wander from place to place.
This sentence is correct.
We wander from one place to another


After travelling, we were tired. 
This sentence is correct.

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