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I try to eat many fruits and vegetables and may vitamin. And i go to the park near my home. I try three times a week jogging with mt dog.

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I try to eat many fruits and vegetables and may vitamin. And i go to the park near my home.
I try to eat many fruits and vegetables, and I take vitamins. I also go to the park near my home and try to jog three times a week with my dog.
Use comma to separate ideas or words. Make sure you use appropriate words for your sentences. Also, combine sentences with the same thoughts.

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