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Do you like meeting new people? Why or why not?

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작성일: 2018년 09월21일(금) 오후09:51
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I like meeting new people because I think it's vitality of human life. human is social animal. therefore mean of meeting new people, it's necessary for life

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I like meeting new people because I think it's vitality of human life.
I like meeting new people because I think it’s vital for human life.
Vitality means capacity for survival while the word vital means necessity. Vital is more appropriate in this sentence since you meant here that it is part of humans to meet new people. Also, the correct preposition is “for”.
human is social animal. 

Human is social animal.
Human is a social animal.
Put the article "a" because you are referring to the noun animal. Also, since you are talking about humans in general so it should be in plural form. Also, don’t forget that the first letters of the first words of your sentences should be in capital letter.
Humans are social animals.

therefore mean of meeting new people, it's necessary for life
Therefore, meeting new people is necessary for life.
Remove the word “mean”. Also, don't forget to end your sentences with punctuation marks. You can also try this sentence:
Therefore, meeting new people is a necessity of life.

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