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Make a list on how can you prevent gum diseases

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Make a list on how can you prevent gum diseases. 1.Regular brushing(especially before sleep) 2.Stop smoking 3.Reduce alcohol intake. 4.Floss 5.Go to dental clinic regularly 6.Eat healty food for good nutrition 7.A good sleep (at least 7 hours)


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Make a list on how can you prevent gum diseases:

1.Regular brushing(especially before sleep)
This is correct as sleep is also a noun, but it's better to put it in a gerund form.
Regular brushing(especially before sleeping)

2.Stop smoking
This is correct.

3.Reduce alcohol intake
This is correct.

4.Floss
This is correct

5.Go to dental clinic regularly
This is correct.

6.Eat healty food for good nutrition
Eat healthy food for good nutrition
This sentence is correct. Just be mindful of your spelling. 

7.A good sleep (at least 7 hours)
This is correct.

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