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Make a list on how can you prevent gum diseases
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작성일: 2018년 08월10일(금) 오후03:17
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Make a list on how can you prevent gum diseases. 1.Regular brushing(especially before sleep) 2.Stop smoking 3.Reduce alcohol intake. 4.Floss 5.Go to dental clinic regularly 6.Eat healty food for good nutrition 7.A good sleep (at least 7 hours)
검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation]초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence] Make a list on how can you prevent gum diseases:
1.Regular brushing(especially before sleep)
This is correct as sleep is also a noun, but it's better to put it in a gerund form.Regular brushing(especially before sleeping) 2.Stop smoking
This is correct.
3.Reduce alcohol intake
This is correct.4.Floss
This is correct5.Go to dental clinic regularly
This is correct.
6.Eat healty food for good nutrition
Eat healthy food for good nutrition This sentence is correct. Just be mindful of your spelling.
7.A good sleep (at least 7 hours)
This is correct.