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Describe Your Typical and Ideal Lunch

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I usually eat fast food, cup noodle or, I eat food which i ate for dinner yesterday. I think the ideal lunch is eating lunch with my family. I think that it is ideal the lunch ever. 


I usually eat fast food, cup noodle or, I eat food which i ate for dinner yesterday. 
I usually eat fast food, cup noodle, or the food which ate for dinner yesterday. 
You can use "the" with the singular form of a count noun when you want to make a general statement about all things of a particular type.
“I” should always be capitalized.

I think the ideal lunch is eating lunch with my family.
I think an ideal lunch is eating with my family.
Use 'aninstead of 'the' because 'the' is used if there is only one, specific 'ideal lunch'. In this case,  an 'ideal lunch' could be different for other people. You can delete 'lunch' in the predicate to avoid redundancy.

I think that it is ideal the lunch ever.
I think that it is the most ideal lunch ever.
Using the expression 'ever' usually means that there is comparison among several things. If you want to compare one 'ideal lunch' with another, you can use quantifiers such as 'most'.

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