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작성일: 2018년 07월06일(금) 오후07:02
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i want to live in farm! i don't like many buildings and busy poeple. i love past time feel. so i want to live in farm.

검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation]
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence


Corrected Sentences:

I want to live in farm.
I want to live in the farm.

Capitalize the first letter of the word in your sentence. The article "the" id necessary in this sentence.

i don't like many buildings and busy poeple.
I don't like many buildings and busy people.
Capitalize the first letter of the word in your sentence. Please be mindful of your spelling.
I hate places with many buildings and busy people.

i love past time feel.so i want to live in farm.
I love the feeling of " style="text-decoration:underline">being relaxed, that's why I want to live in the farm.
Capitalize the first letter of the word in your sentence.  Past time feel" is better to express as "the feeling being relaxed".

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