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How do you take direction?

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작성일: 2018년 06월26일(화) 오후11:08
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검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation] 
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]  

I accept that I am not perfect. I think the important thing is to learn from them. I am a very open mind person. I can easily growth( Did you told me to class?, actually, I didn’t listen to word exactly. ) intruction and direction. I’m a fast learner because i am always ready to listen. Although co-worker criticizes me, I know it doesn’t necessarily mean that he or she dosen’t like me. I will listen carefully, analyze and evaluate what I heard. Then, I’ll process the impormation and decide problem I can solve. Also, I’ll take notes, remind myself continuously how to fix the problem not to repeat mistake. * How do you work under pressure? I notice that I do my best work when under pressure. I enjoy undertaking challenging assignments and finding creative solutions. One time many patients came on at the same time. Instead of stressing out, first of all, I found out what was most important thing. Then, I created a detailed schedule and I prioritized what I had to do. That allowed me to complete assignments on time. Stress is a part of life, I am able to no matter what I am working on.   

I accept that I am not perfect. I think the important thing is to learn from them. 
These are correct.

I am a very open mind person. 
I am a very open-minded person.
Check your spelling of "open-minded". "Open mind" is a noun. "Open-minded" is an adjective. If you have an "open mind", you are an "open-minded" person.

I can easily growth( Did you told me to class?, actually, I didn’t listen to word exactly. ) intruction and direction. I’m a fast learner because i am always ready to listen. 
I can easily grasp (Did you tell me in class? Actually, I didn’t hear the exact word) instructions and directions. I’m a fast-learner because I am always ready to listen.
>> The correct word is ‘grasp’ (it’s good that you asked ^^).
>> ‘Told’ should be changed to ‘tell’ because you already used ‘did’. If you use ‘did’, the verb should take its present form. Example: She told you = Did she tell you? / I drank coffee = Did I drink coffee?
>> Remove the comma after the question mark.
>> Capitalize the first letter in ‘actually’ because it’s the first word in a sentence.
>> You probably mean you didn’t ‘hear’, because I know you were ‘listening.’
>> The correct spelling is ‘instruction.’ Change it to ‘instructions’ and ‘directions’ because you are not talking about only one instruction.
>> ‘Fast-learner’ is a hyphenated compound word. 
>> Always capitalize ‘I.’



Although co-worker criticizes me, I know it doesn’t necessarily mean that he or she dosen’t like me. 
Although a co-worker criticizes me, I know it doesn’t necessarily mean that he or she doesn’t like me. 
>> If you are referring to only one co-worker, please add the article ‘a.’
>> Please check your spelling of ‘doesn’t.’



I will listen carefully, analyze and evaluate what I heard. 
This is correct. 

Then, I’ll process the impormation and decide problem I can solve. 
Then, I’ll process the information and decide how I can solve the problem. 
The correct spelling is ‘information
If you are talking about ways to solve a problem, you can say 
‘how I can solve…



Also, I’ll take notes, remind myself continuously how to fix the problem not to repeat mistake. 
Also, I’ll take notes, remind myself continuously how to fix the problem and make sure not to repeat the mistake.
The last part of the sentence seems lacking or is incomplete. I rephrased it.


* How do you work under pressure? 
This is correct.

I notice that I do my best work when under pressure. I enjoy undertaking challenging assignments and finding creative solutions.
These are correct. 

One time many patients came on at the same time.
One time, many patients came in at the same time.
Add a comma after ‘one time’.
The correct preposition is ‘
in’, i.e., in the room.


Instead of stressing out, first of all, I found out what was most important thing. 
Instead of stressing out, first of all, I found out what was the most important thing. 
Add the article ‘the’ before the noun.


Then, I created a detailed schedule and I prioritized what I had to do. That allowed me to complete assignments on time. 
These are correct.

Stress is a part of life, I am able to no matter what I am working on. 
Stress is a part of life, I am able to handle no matter what I am working on. 
An infinitive follows this pattern: to + verb. Your sentence lacks a verb. I added ‘handle.’  

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