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If you could have any job in the world, what would it be? why?

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im programmer, because programmer is very simple and logical so i want like steve jobs famous programmer. thanks.

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im programmer, because programmer is very simple and logical so i want like steve jobs famous programmer. thanks.  
I'm a programmer because programmer is a very simple and logical job. I want to be like Steve Jobs, a famous
programmer. Thanks.

Always capitalize the first letter of the first word. Put an article before a singular noun. The first letter of a proper noun has to be capitalized. Remove some connectors if the sentences are too long. 
I want to be a programmer, because it is very simple and logical. I want to be a famous programmer like Steve Jobs.

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