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Tell about the time when you felt embarrassed

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작성일: 2018년 05월04일(금) 오후11:08
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I was very embarrassed when the card was stalled because the card was overdue.

검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]  
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation]
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]


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I was very embarrassed when the card was stalled because the card was overdue. 
I was very embarrassed when my credit card was declined because it has expired.
I was very embarrassed when my credit card was declined because I was not able to pay my dues.

The correct word to be used should be declined (means it was not accepted by the credit machine).

It has to be “my card”, otherwise we wouldn’t know if who owns it.
There can be two versions of the sentence, depending on what you mean.

  

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